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Soul mates Life is a busy drone of capabilities tested and gained
The thrum of the ever pressing expectations groan alongside
A moment...
Emotions rise and fall, tensions tighten and break
Plucking twangs of failure and strums of success
A moment...
The pulse of life changes yet continues in dreamscapes
Forging and Fashioning some semblance of them in waking
A moment...
I take a breath on a heartbeat in the spaces of moments
I respire in these moments lost in the sense of you
These are the breathing spaces I live for
Absorbed in the essence of you
Hugged by your ever present love,
the moments,
In between our breathing spaces
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Life is a busy drone of capabilities tested and gained
The thrum of the ever pressing expectations groan alongside
A moment...
Emotions rise and fall, tensions tighten and break
Strumming Twangs of failure and strums of success
A moment...
The pulse of life changes yet continues in dreamscapes
Forging and Fashioning some semblance of them in waking
A moment...
I take a breath on a heartbeat in the spaces of moments
I respire in these moments lost in the sense of you
Absorbed in the essence of you
Hugged by your ever present love
These are the breathing spaces I live for
the moments,
In my breathing spaces
Lofty
lovely, especially the last part.
ppeace,Koko
Poetry is passion,imagination & soul mixing together....
Words
Thanks koko :) still in draft
Thanks koko :) still in draft like most of my works one day perhaps ill have time and bring them all ip to par :) hugss
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Please
finish when you are able
tis lovely to emote those feelings
hugs, Koko
Poetry is passion,imagination & soul mixing together....
Words
this is lovely
this is lovely
Thanks bourkie one of my
Thanks bourkie one of my faves x
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
this is excellent
this is excellent
Thankyou so much!
Thankyou so much!
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Awe, thank you! Much
Awe, thank you! Much appreciated! Can't wait to see more of your stuff! Cheers SS
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
that was awesome, I don't
that was awesome, I don't think it needs anything changed, I love the breathing spaces embraced between the exchange of faces
What a wonderful way to
What a wonderful way to phrase it! That's why you're a part of the collective ;) HugSS
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Beautiful!
Love it! "breathing spaces" Great concept/title!
Aww, shucks and thanks, dear
Aww, shucks and thanks, dear b! Massive HugSS you made my day... Again! ;)
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
;-)
Sorry Dear, I was in a rush, as I seem to be lately! You are brilliant!!! If you ever had the time to polish all the gems you mined, no one could stand to glance at your radiance!!! You are truely amazing Dear!!!
Superbusy too Hun always
Superbusy too Hun always thinking of you b HugSS :)
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Just breathe
And let the space fade across the distance in your eyes
Just breathe
With a little patience, all can be realized
While you breathe through your moments of test, gain, and expectation
Don't forget, you deserve some congratulations
For only from a mind as genius as yours
Can words so captivating, so easily pour
Respiration in your sense of space
So tantalizing, this rhythmic pace
As it sits, dually noted
This piece tops that charts, so it has been voted
And any adjustments you make
Can only embellish the brilliance it already says
"Music is a universal language and needs not be translated. With it, soul speaks to soul" - Songsterr