Un resurrected

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tragedy

In this dark little box you call my mind
I see through holes, glittery stars
And as the light pours in I see the colours
Yet, I fail to see the light in your eyes
When you kissed me so dull this day,
I knew You died inside, and you killed me by proxy.
Is it all for naught this trove of thought?
It seems so brittle and hopeless now,
The light so bright my eyes singed
A teary aggravated red,
those words still ringing in my head
the thoughts refuse to leave through the cracks
Rather, bouncing to and fro,there and back
You said " it wasn't worth it."
Now you fondle my ashes
Wondering where the warm glow went...

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Oh b! Every time you comment I feel. I have to tweak something! Lol! So I did! ;)

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:'i life...

:'i life...


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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Love it!

"Now you fondle my ashes
Wondering where the warm glow went..."
Some good lines here, but for me, those last two lines are pure gold and make the poem!!!

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Awe thanks master! Only I

Awe thanks master! Only I tweaked it in honor of your teachings! ;)


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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PMSL!!!

Ahhhhh!!! You've fallen under the "unfinished poem" curse! ;-)

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Ahhh, where you say curse I

Ahhh, where you say curse I now say blessing! Freaky Friday? ;) lmao!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."