Shit poetry is still poetry*

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Yeah, no romance bounding towards me
in thunderous literary waves of late
No niggle of inspiration to make the mind boggle
Just some lame old shit poetry,
There's plenty to muse but no eloquencia to infuse
apparitions that in spire awe need to written
but my hand with my mind is not smitten
What I start is a chain of symbolic diarrhoea
No use at all a spade a spade I must call
It's just some lame old shit poetry of late
Oh well, all the time, we can't always be
literally literary greats...
And even this benign shitty literary attempt
Which for some might even hold contempt
It belongs up there in the lines of poetry
A few rows up from jots and a few more rows down from poetry greats
A poem, just a shitty poem a poem none the less
As the definition states.

;p

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Yes I realise my writings are less than compelling and devoid of art, filigree of emotions are just staying stark till further notice.

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Beavis's picture

Great title ;-)

PMSL!!! Love you Dear! And some great lines here too, especially,
"There's plenty to muse but no eloquencia to infuse
apparitions that in spire awe need to written
but my hand with my mind is not smitten
What I start is a chain of symbolic diarrhoea"
Even your mental bowels movements smell like roses! ;-p

Moonshadow's picture

You? Shit poetry? NEVER!!! "D

You? Shit poetry? NEVER!!! "D


Dont look for me, I'll find you ~Moonshadow

SSmoothie's picture

PSML! Um totally! Trust me!

PSML! Um totally! Trust me! Lol! Good to see you back dear!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

The_Mav's picture

This isn't shit poetry!and

This isn't shit poetry!and roc is right!


If its possible, no matter what it always starts with a dream! 

RoC's picture

Poetry

is still poetry, no matter how you write
And nothing close to shit, could ever leave your mind
You may feel dull and lacking in the sense
But it is still art, when you have written it
Fear not, for it's just from your emotion
Soon you will again feel the passion within
And then you will write the way you want again

But remember my lines as I utter out this truth
Poetry is never bad when it is written by you


"Music is a universal language and needs not be translated. With it, soul speaks to soul" - Songsterr

SSmoothie's picture

Love you Roc! Sincere tight

Love you Roc! Sincere tight HugSS :D !


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

mrpoofs's picture

hey, if it speaks truth it

hey, if it speaks truth it speaks truth. better 'shit' poetry than some vapid overly ornamented BS. And I think all your poetry is great

SSmoothie's picture

Ditto mr poofs :) thanks with

Ditto mr poofs :) thanks with all the colours of the rainbow in all the combinations ;)


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."