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Fucked over. Title deserves better, but then hey, so do I.
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tragedy The dull ache of impending doom
tightly gripped around the heart
The ominous scent in the air,
Heavy, thick and goading
Teetering on the brink
Endless anticipation
Winding reason tighter and tighter
the sense of loss So overwhelming
Yet it still has no name.
The shadow looms
What does this mean?
Disbelief!
Devastation...
Grief?
These are small words
For such looming desolation
Prayers seem weak
And I am void.
The dull ache of impending
The dull ache of impending doom..
Man what a start to this piece..
Awe Smoothie I'm throwing you this:
HUGS!
I'd rather you write trash talk than bare witness to your heart breaking..
"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo
That's very sweet ashes :)
That's very sweet ashes :) hugss
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
The is very deep and very
The is very deep and very effectively presents the feeling of unexplainable anxiety! This is one of those great works that sit in your brain for years to come! Great write!
If its possible, no matter what it always starts with a dream!
I think it's more than that
I think it's more than that Mav... It's that treading of deadly ground when something is after you and you know the face of your demon but you don't know who or what the demon is behind that face or what your fate is, though you are clearly aware that it does lay in the balance... your just to sure why?
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."