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LOVE AND OTHER RELATED BULLSHIT the world as I knew it has changed
the sky has fallen, I am not whole,
ocean waves lick my wounded soul
I kiss the sky and and wonder why?
I am deemed most worthy but of what?
the lanscape is barren, and I feel forigen
There is no sun brighter no moon has glowen
any where near where you were born.
the sand hugs my feet, the air wraps me
a symphony of sympathy I feel so patheticly
Lost of hope and love and furtive glances
I lose the string tied gently to my soul
tugged and let loose I watch our hope
float as it ascends to the heavens,
far beyond moon, sun stars and sky
this is the day of lament;
the leaving of your burning question -why?
only the wind, sand, sea and sky know
and they are not given voices of reason and do not say...
Boom! Thud.
Boom! Thud.
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
I really, really, really
I really, really, really adore this poem! It just does something to my soul... the ultimate question... who knows why? I just hope someone or something does know otherwise no one is in control! Love the words used here you've created a sense of loss and hope at the same time... Great work! Kind regards The Mav
If its possible, no matter what it always starts with a dream!
Thankyou, it's one of my
Thankyou, it's one of my faves the why is a very painful thing when the answers are not forthcoming! Cheers SS.
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
"I lose the string tied gently to my soul...
"I lose the string tied gently to my soul
tugged and let loose I watch our hope
float as it ascends to the heavens,
far beyond moon, sun stars and sky
this is the day of lament;
the leaving of your burning question -why?"
I loooove this part right here!
Dont look for me, I'll find you ~Moonshadow
Yeah that ol question why?
Yeah that ol question why? And it burns, burns, like a ring of fire... Hugss
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
F'ing great lines, my Dear!
F'ing great lines, my Dear! ;-) sorry I didn't have time at the time but this was amazing!
"I lose the string tied gently to my soul
tugged and let loose I watch our hope
float as it ascends to the heavens,
far beyond moon, sun stars and sky
this is the day of lament;
the leaving of your burning question -why?
only the wind, sand, sea and sky know
and they are not given voices of reason and do not say..."
Jeez! I know you wrote that in 5 minutes, or less!!! You are incredible, my Dear!!! ;-)
Thanks b when it comes it
Thanks b when it comes it poors, very often it doesn't, but if I don't wite I will stop all together I know me, and you guys matter too much for me to stop. :) I really appreciate your support you're wonderful and have helped me explore and develop my poetry so much dear master poet ;)
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Ok you got the earth wid and
Ok you got the Earth, wind and fire romance thing going on here, I can respect that! I like it! I like this a lot! It's very different some cool mindscapes! Thanks!
Thanks ? You confuse me sir!
Thanks ? You confuse me sir! :)
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Love it!
Love it!
Thanks beavis, it is so
Thanks beavis, it is so wonderful of you to say! you always make my day! Massive Hugss!
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Back at ya Babe! ;-)
Back at ya Babe! ;-)
The serpent of fuck up cups
The serpent of fuck up cups has returned I just REALISED I got a thing for beverage vessels...hmmmmn... Awesome!
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Speechless.
...
"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo
:D thanks bitch! Hugss! Means
:D thanks bitch! Hugss! Means the world!
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
That is a complement...
That is a complement... Right?
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Nothing but compliments from
Nothing but compliments from me ^_^
"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo
Wow! Thanks ashes ! Hugss :D
Wow! Thanks ashes ! Hugss :D
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."