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It just wont go
those terrors of my mind
my sixth sense?
my nonsense.
sure.
I beat myself up over it
but really theres no doubt.
moving them on,
moving them on,
moving them on,
moving them on,
moving them on.
I cant hold this down
I never could
Knowing things
I shoudnt know,
I shouldnt know,
I shouldnt know,
I shoudnt know.
My private world of dread
the prickles on my neck
the loss of faculty
the speakers
the the escapers of words.
It is not fair!
it is not fair!
it is not fair!
Im unlocked
I cant bare
I cant bare.
to close that
eye.

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Beavis's picture

Sometimes, storms quench

Sometimes, storms quench fires....

cevance's picture

My oh My!

This made my day. It reminds me of myself. It reads good, and it has a nice beat.

running_with_rabbits's picture

hmmmm

this is what the poem makes me think of:

http://www.ted.com/talks/barry_schwartz_on_the_paradox_of_choice.html


Much Love

Ashley

Fitzgerald's picture

I've read all your new work.

I've read all your new work. You haven't lost your touch! I'm glad you're still writing and making beautiful work. I've also been writing, however its only on paper... Soon it'll be posted.

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OMGOSH!!! REALLY????? IS IT REALLY YOU!???????

FIIIIIIIIIIIIITZYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!
I CANT WAIT!!!! SO GOOD TO HEAR FROM YOU AGAIN!!!! HAPPY DANCE!!!!! OK I'M WAITING! :D!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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Funny how I was thinking of you...

Paper love I say to myself before nearly every write! ") You are an inspiration I cant wait to hear about all your adventures!!! HugSS!!!!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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Thank you so much SS. And I

Thank you so much SS. And I have plenty of stories to tell you and everyone else who wants to read. I'm glad I got to talk to you today. I'll be back soon.