pp my friends and me

I'm in
I'm up
Scroll down,
Across and up.
I see my crowd is
Here!
scroll down
You have 12
New mesages! Great!
What truths from our minds
We debate and find
A method To relate
Threes not a crowd
in this line of poetic friends
Our vine of friendship
is always ready to extend,
But as our passionate dreams
Occur at different sleeps
We can't stay on for keeps
Plenty of smiles and winks
Thoughts about what we think
From gutter trash to heavenly romance
The buds of inspiration reigns
as one flame burns out the other
Lights it up again! So
Let me enjoy this moment
Scroll down, across and up again
To see our psudonyms ranked in line
With fine poetic commentary and rhyme
School up scroll down scroll across
And fill your eyes with each page
A scripted ballad of camaraderie from
The divine above the universe of love.
PP, my friends and me. ;)

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Draft please friends feel free to revise :) HugSS

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SSmoothie's picture

AWWWWW! love you guys!

;*


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

Moonshadow's picture

What a great fun sounding

What a great fun sounding bunch! ") I love this! This is why it's such a great site!


Dont look for me, I'll find you ~Moonshadow

Beavis's picture

I love it! What's this about

I love it! What's this about a draft??? It's great!

SSmoothie's picture

Awww! thanks boss!

thought we could all make a little better? no? ;)


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

Beavis's picture

LMAO!!!

I think it's great! But I bet some can help build on it further. I know Rhythm always has excellent lines just awaiting inspiration such as this! ;-)

Beavis's picture

BTW!!!

Love the new profile pic!

SSmoothie's picture

Ah, but have you read the

Ah, but have you read the poem about it? It's called eggs suck ;)


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

ashes_theartofburning's picture

So cute!

From gutter trash to heavenly romance.

Haha I love it!
^_^


"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo

Beavis's picture

Love it!

What a great line!