knight and day

There you go again
rescuing me like some damsel
in modernday distress
The one who I can count on
when others can't, endearing I confess.

You looked so purposeful
as you brushed away my hair
from my face with your eyes
couldnt imagine life
without our complication

Were like night and day
You shine and I shade or
Is it the other way?
It's so complicated
and again I'm lost!

But in you I trust;
So, go ahead save me once again
If you must!

;)

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Moonshadow's picture

like night and day! awesome write!

This is just so good in so many ways I LOVE the second and third stanzas! So rich in delightful ways! I like the way you suggest he's your knight in shining armour, very beautiful write! Thankyou! Cheers MS


Dont look for me, I'll find you ~Moonshadow

SSmoothie's picture

Thankyou! ;) HugSS

Thankyou! ;) HugSS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

SSmoothie's picture

Actually for a poem written in a fast food chain...

I am pretty proud of this one! a logo imprinted napkin holds its birth... my trash can poetry buddy, I can certainly understand!!! Cheers SS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

Beavis's picture

Great poem!

I love it! Life and love are so complicated and so simple!

SSmoothie's picture

Yes! another reason why it facinates us all

so much! :)


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."