whisky tears

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Soul mates

I have nothing
but the look in your eyes
To remind me
and these whisky tears
won't dry like they should
I can't hold you
except in a memory
I can't feel you
Except in my heart
I can't love you
Except with my soul
You're that piece
That's missing
A perfect fit
Only you puttied up
my space with creeps
And still I watch you fumble
Afraid you will fall again
Only not for me
As soon as I empty
This cup the whisky
Tears keep filling up.
They don't evaporate
Like they should.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

For those of us who understand HugSS

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and these distant memories

and these distant memories now brilliantly alive... oh hum. ;?


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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Oh SSmoothie. I do know just

Oh SSmoothie. I do know just how you feel.


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:)

:)


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

battlepink's picture

“I have nothing but the look

“I have nothing
but the look in your eyes”

This very first line blew me away….and it just got better. You’re amazing.

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Aww thanks! I like your style

Aww thanks! I like your style too!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

Moonshadow's picture

Oh beautifully sad!

You are something else! Whisky tears... who thinks of that??? Great poem!


Dont look for me, I'll find you ~Moonshadow

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Again thank you dear thesis a

Again thank you dear thesis a very personal write HugSS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

Beavis's picture

;-)

I think the psychic friends network is back! So sad,so beautiful, so honest. I love it! Now let's have another round ;-)

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cheers

Friend, bottoms up! :)


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

running_with_rabbits's picture

omg smoothie i love you!

omg smoothie i love you! wings is right you DID steal my pen


Much Love

Ashley

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shhhhhh! dont tell beaves i took it !

It was his turn, only I couldn't wait with all that editing... Perhaps if I sneak, and put it back he won't notice!? Pssst! Hey Pwings! I need your help you distract beaves while I put the pen back! Thanks bunnie n Pwings HugSS ;)


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

running_with_rabbits's picture

lol oh do not worry my love

lol oh do not worry my love he stole it first while you weren't looking
used it, did not abuse it, and placed it safely back in my hands before I woke
you got it after him :p


Much Love

Ashley

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SPRUNG!!! O_0

LOL! o_-


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."