haikus to die for

The World lost its hue
The moment when I lost you,
My heart was untrue.

 

One wrinkle each eye
Ages a person so much
Not by smiling though

 

Hold my heart in hands
The warm night breathes life in me
As You breathe in her

 

As death the breath takes
Angels await in the wings
Ground breaks angels fly

 

Round red fun balloon
floating on a string in fun!
Pop! The sound breaks me

 

The day we did meet

You knocked me off my feet
beating me your treat

 

some poems rhyme well
Others short of the mark fell,
But this one did well! ;)

 

one haiku is not;
enough to tell a story,
but makes one think hard.

 

I could go on lots
but, not in this haiku see;
It has a limit.

 

On and on and on
The world will keep turning
But you still stand still.

 

This is begining.
This is the middle of it.
now where is the end?

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Some quick haiku for fun ;).

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Silky smooth and elegant
A daily delight

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Thanks beaves! But you are

Thanks beaves! But you are the haiku master along with heather and a couple others ;)


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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Added a few more... Couldn't

Added a few more... Couldn't resist! ;)


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."