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Soul mates V2
Hold.
Do not turn away
And keep my hopes alive
Say you will stay
____________________________
Keep.
The seasons come and go
And yet here I stay
Waiting for love to turn my way
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Give.
hand Yourself in to my love
Chances passed in the night
And still I devise ways
______________________________
Release.
The fear that takes you away
from my prison's cage
Will lead you back to me again
_______________________________
Till then you'll hold,
keep my notion warm,
give what you can
till loves great release...
V1
Hold.
Do not turn away
Say you will stay
And keep my hopes alive
____________________________
Keep.
The seasons come and go
And yet here I stay
Waiting for love to turn my way
_____________________________
Give.
Chances passed in the night
And still I devise ways
hand Yourself in to my love
______________________________
Release.
The fear that takes you away
from my prison's cage
Will lead you back to me again
_______________________________
Till then you'll hold,
keep my notion warm,
give what you can
till loves great release...
You are really stretching
You are really stretching yourself, and very great things are happening! This is really another form you do very well ;-)
hey! how did I miss your comment beaves???
sorry! lol just going through old poems and having a laugh! ;) Cheers SS
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
What a beautiful piece.
What a beautiful piece. You're awesome SS
OMG! TONY!!!!
I AM GOING STRAIGHT TO YOUR PORTFOLIO! MISSED YOU! HOW WAS EVERYTHING? YOU STILL VERY BUSY? Hope you managed to write some more! Been very busy so only got time to jot stuff down before I forget it, lol! Welcome back my friend! HugSS!!!
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Love this :)
Even the structuring of this is perfect -- and it ends with the hope of something transcendent to come; well done!
kerry
http://kerrybrennan007.blogspot.ca
thanks kerry!
I know theie is still need work but at least the bones are there! You are very kind HugSS
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."