The day has faded away
and the last light
kisses the horizon goodnight
The moon beams come out to play
and chases the last ray out of sight
The moon climbs over
and catches up
with her little halos asking of
Her lover the sun,
who makes her glow
in his presence.
Pulling the carpet of tides
in her chase to claw herself near
she would rather
disappear in daylight
than be away forever I fear
Sometimes they dance the tango
as they pass in the clear
and sometimes they dance alone
seductively drawing eachother near
Destined only to feel the effects
of the glow each light beam brings
As gravity pulled together;
this union a catastrophe would bring.
With unlucked quarters
in crescents
Other masters call to them service
But every now and then
hiding in the shadows
of the earths surface
A stolen moment
of love is exchanged
eclipsed only by us it seems
Thus you are my warm sunlight
and I your cool moonbeams
Destined to hide in the shadows
of rings as Saturn steps in
Running rings around us as
we dance
like the moon chasing the sun.
This is the best one I've
This is the best one I've ever read by you. Seriously, good job on the rhythm and rhyme, and on the choice diction.
Cheers,
Adam_San
Thanks Adam !
You know, it's kinda growing on me too! Sometimes you need to step back and come back and read poems again! Gonna miss ya too :( but I'll check in keep writing. :)
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
I love the way that mind of
I love the way that mind of yours thinks! All your new post are great. I don't know how you do it. One after another like nothing. Anyways my friend awesome work.
Thanks Fitzy I have wonderful inspirations
Such as yourself who make poems like 'Paper Love' and I think I can't be that awesome so I try to punch out a few half good ones to make up for it, I figure one day I'll have that one ultimate moment that ultimate poem with the ultimate lines such is my aspiration, in paper/digital love. :) can you write something soon? I'm hanging out! :D
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Ill try and pop something out
Ill try and pop something out soon lol
YES PLEASE!
Can't wait! Re read central! :) cheers SS
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
This is fantastic.
This is fantastic.
Thank you!
Very much! :)
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."