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Running through the endless pages
Doused in so much pain
Absorbing all the energies
And trying to remain so sane

Running through the lines in times
Through the rhythm of the pages
Hoping against hope to find the binds
That carry through the wisdom of the sages

Blindness of soul
Denial of God
Hunger of the body
Appetites of emotion
Give in
Give up
Dig in
bare down
Hold up hope
Hold down reality
Bursting for finality

Running through the pages spewing full of painful lines
I hear the echo of troubles in their raging minds
Ringing louder and louder collectively crying
And I unable to bear sob in kind with hearts dying

Let me take your sorrows
and burn them here with me
Let me wipe clean the pages of your misery,
Let me hold them and purge them with the
Fires and saged smoke let your troubles
Vanish with me as I wash your wounds with soap
And balm with kisses and dress them with loving concern

Let me banish hurtful sprites,
Let me chase away your sorrows,
Let me call for help to fight you demons
And help you to be well again
To standing bathing in the light

I wish only to free you today
from the grips of hell
to know it can be dealt with
on a stronger day
To return you to yourself
when you are well.
This I pray.

Hold fast and Tackle your demons from within
Forgive yourself as I have forgiven you.
Don't hold your torch of sin
Let no worthlessness seep in.

Lay your troubles here with me
Running through the pages of your concerns
Feeling the pain of running through your lines
Let me reconcile them with stone cold truth
Your Whispers hushed with my whispers
I'll take them and eat them with my soul
and bring them out and give them over
warm as gentle fires taming the super nova
In the form of overcoming
you not being you by choice of others.

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grahf's picture

Great piece. There's a lot

Great piece. There's a lot of good, at times epic, imagery here. But perhaps what packs the most punch is the short, choppy and guttural lines of...

"Give in
Give up
Dig in
bare down."

It's kind of like a transitional spot in the poem, where you grit your teeth and then are set free to open up your verse again. Power-packed, good stuff SS.

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Yes you're right,

It is a bit long and sometimes repetitive but that's what it is like for me so I went with it :) thank you so much I really value your opinion based on your beautiful works, you know your stuff very creatively I might add! Thanks SS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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Feel it.

Yup.


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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Horsespirit!!!!

You are so wonderful I am so glad I have met you! You have changed my world so much brighter, you give me peace and hope! I love what you are and who you are! HugSS SS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."