If I like a poem that rhymes

If I like a poem that rhymes
Why shouldn't I rhyme it?
If I like a poem that's got
no rhyme connection at all
So what?
And if I want to put
the two together
Why shouldn't I?

If I like, if I like
A poem, a poem
Without, without
Any any any
Structure at all

Then why shouldn't I just
Write and write
what ever at all?
What's it to you?
What it is to me!

You criticize
and I just move ahead
My ideas are zany sometimes
Like twisting things up I my head
If I like it I'll try it and you're welcome to say it stinks
But it's just a sign you're way behind on what to think.

Anyways it's ok you know what i meant
It's about what I like and what I think
And if you really look deep into a poem no matter what
You'll see a whole new world of deep meaning stong and from the heart.

Good luck!

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Fitzgerald's picture

Damn I never rhyme! Lol

Damn I never rhyme! Lol

SSmoothie's picture

It doesn't seem to be handy cap

For you? Lol! ;) just keep on doing what you're doing, I'm pretty sure I've caught an accidental rhyme or two in there, so you're covered! ;)


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

facethetruth2b's picture

ABSOULUTLY !!!!!!!!! WHO DAT?

ABSOULUTLY !!!!!!!!! WHO DAT? SSMOOTHIE'S DAT !!!!


you laugh at me because I am differant, I laugh at you because You are all the same ...(KoRn) J.D......

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Hey girl I was just editing it! How have you been my dear?

True dat aye! ;) so funny! Lol! Been sooooo busy!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

facethetruth2b's picture

I have been good , nothing to

I have been good , nothing to complain about yet .. I know the busyness it is to familiar ....


you laugh at me because I am differant, I laugh at you because You are all the same ...(KoRn) J.D......