The other wish.

If I had one wish
I'd ask for another
And our arms gently holding eachother
And with that other wish
I would ask for another
And our lives entangled happily around eachother
And with that other wish
I would ask for another
And our joys unlaced with bittersweet bother
And with that other wish
I'd ask for another
And find our passion unperturbed by the other
And with that other wish
I'd wish for another
That we'll always be indeed the one for the other
And With that other wish
never need to wish
for another.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

It'd be silly not to ask for more wishes if you had one wish for anything right?

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yes it would be silly not to

yes it would be silly not to ask for another , because they would be so many things I would want towish for that one would not be enough..... I would stop at 4 I think 4 would do me just fine ....


you laugh at me because I am differant, I laugh at you because You are all the same ...(KoRn) J.D......

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Hey good point!

Ask for two ore the poem would make more sense! But probably a little less lyrical;) who knows? I'll try it out! :)


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

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I was just saying if I had

I was just saying if I had one wish I would ask up to four , Your poem is wonderful just the way it is ......


you laugh at me because I am differant, I laugh at you because You are all the same ...(KoRn) J.D......

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Thanks but I'll still try it

No harm in that ;) yes I just thought aout it... I would ask that no one would need to wish for anything, but then no one would appreciate anything! Lol!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

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my first would be a cure for

my first would be a cure for cancer and other sickness's except old age that is a right given to us , then my other would be for enough landd to take care of the animals in the shelters where they can rome free and enjoy their lives , another would be for the poor for a place where they could go and get on their feet a job for all , then another would be peace throughout the world , then the last one It would have to be for me and that would be for a house in mountains with a little money in the bank not riches just enough to live my life comfortable ...


you laugh at me because I am differant, I laugh at you because You are all the same ...(KoRn) J.D......

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Best wishes!

What wonderful generous wishes!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am