Rings

Thoughts hang like rings around my head 

Travling in both directions 

My mind, 

my body,

my soul.. 

Infinite wonder condensed 

Retraced and reodered

Recombination and shifts 

Micro, macro expansion contractions 

Each opposite a breath of existence 

Cyclical revolutions that seem awesome 

Are really spectuclarly mundane  

Worlds of words within dimension  

Calculuses entwined and layered 

Mathematical equations peppered of anomalies 

Forces of Life

holding the fabric of the universe 

In my thought a universe of its own 

Enmeshed in yours 

Help.me see the codex,

the logic 

That smashed your workd with mine 

And why you hit dead centre like evey other time 

But you hit different 

And now you're running rings around my  mind 

Tearing up my carefully laid pavement 

And yet you make me feel like everything is fine 

Seeing colours only truly for the first time 

And knowings that from all the chaos 

The order is divine. 

And what hits most is

your ability to blur my stright lines 

And see the truth we all seek to find 

All the infinite universes at a time

 

 

 

 

 

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What a hair-raising,

What a hair-raising, acrobatic leap of language you used to bring back memories of my own infernal, insanely glorious youth when love was a charm that could make me profoundly wise or completely mad. 

 

You begin with the delightful, mind-bending dichotomy of universal truths: breathtaking wonders under the guise of the mundane; the all-encompassing quantum field in subatomic particles . . . 

 

What is this sorcery? 

 

The balanced whirlwind of insight when two hearts, two minds, are one and "The order is divine".  

 

And that ending: Golden. Perfect. 

 

Another stunner, my gifted friend.