She's like the wind

 

 

 

 Her grace and beauty blew in like a warm wind


Caressing the soul of one's creativity,

Raising blooms wherever she touched.

A blessing so powerful heaven could tear open with one thought and rain joy or tickle with delight!

With the same breath a tornado of hard hitting truths could lay down to rest when lyrically wrought

a gentle awakening from slumber

Without objection one would invite her careful dissection, the intimate eye of her perception

Her love is fierce as it is gentle, a stinging healing tincture

And she vanished just like the wind

But the feeling is indelibly there

And I fear always will be in memory only

And if so she unwittingly took my breath with her

On that stellar journey where were so destined to have met.  
So I will go on in suspense looking around every corner of every page for signs of her,

incase she decides to breeze in in that cool way she does and washes every eye anew.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Draft

Her grace and beauty blew in like a warm wind 

Caressing the soul of one's creativity,

Raising blooms wherever she touched.

A blessing so powerful heaven could tear open with one thought and rain joy and tickle with delight 

With the same breath a tornado of hard hitting truths could lay down to rest when lyrically wrought 

a gentle awakening from slumber 

Without objection one would invite her careful dissection, the intimate eye of her perception 

Her love is fierce as it is gentle, 

And she vanished just like the wind 

But the feeling is indelibly there 

And I fear always will be in memory only 

And if so she unwittingly took my breath with her 

On that stellar journey where were so destined to have met.  So I will go on in suspense

Looking around every corner of every page for signs of her, incase she decides to breeze in in that cool way she does and washes every eye anew.

 

 

 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I miss you already.

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I applaud your use of

I applaud your use of metaphor in this poem:  Bravo!


Starward

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Thanks Starward,  I guess

Thanks Starward,  I guess people will figure out the heart and soul may have gone lets hope it is a great place and returns often 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."