smoke rings round the moon

 

 

The merchant builds

a home

with blueprints

 

and smokes

a finely-shaped cigar

 

The bird builds his nest

in a tree

overlooking the canopy

 

and makes

the entire wilderness

his shelter

 

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The juxtaposition of two

The juxtaposition of two lives is very subtle in this poem, which takes a very conversational tone, but the power of the juxtaposition is undeniable and very convincing.


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