Crows bringing darkness Leaves insinuate with wind. Sapphire sun; day’s end.
Yeah, it's a short haiku :P There's a haiku contest in my school, and this is what I'd be submitting. Any comments on how to make it better??
The word bringing is weak, i think you could find a stronger word and replace it.
How about "guiding?" It's the only word I can think of that fits with the syllable constraint.
Yeah that is a better word
Thanks!
The word bringing is weak, i
The word bringing is weak, i think you could find a stronger word and replace it.
How about "guiding?" It's the
How about "guiding?" It's the only word I can think of that fits with the syllable constraint.
Yeah that is a better word
Yeah that is a better word
Thanks!
Thanks!