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How Menacing.

If you knew how much I hate you,
You'd never touch me another day.
You're chilling, bloodcurdling touch.
If you knew how much I loathe you,
the bullet would fall where it may.
The walls don't talk, so sing.
Oh, how terribly I want you dead.
Dead so loud it rings.
And god of his, how menacing, to let him stretch again.
And god of mine, how menacing, to give me estrogen.
How does it feel to be a monster,
In all your glory?
All your praise?
How you fool them.
How you don't fool me.
How menacing.
Humanity has suffocated.

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©9 September 2012 - 4:27am — SpecialSense
1 October 2012 - 5:11pm — GOHIL48
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great poem.. u r great

great poem.. u r great writer:)

4 October 2012 - 9:45pm — SpecialSense
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Thanks!

Thanks!

10 September 2012 - 2:59am — BlindMan
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Beautiful

You are a really good poet, your choice of words are moving. Nice poems

15 September 2012 - 6:07pm — SpecialSense
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thank you!

thank you!

10 September 2012 - 2:33am — hurtandlost
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powerful. you have a special

powerful. you have a special sense. hope to see more from you.

15 September 2012 - 6:07pm — SpecialSense
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thank you so much.

thank you so much.

9 September 2012 - 1:21pm — The_Mav
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this is powerful yet sad and

this is powerful yet sad and creepy! really good write!

If its possible, no matter what it always starts with a dream! 

9 September 2012 - 11:59pm — SpecialSense
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Thank you!

Thank you!