A Tear Against the Facade

Over these lines on pages
I see a heart slowly breaking
And all that runs through my head
Is “Please...let me help you get ahead”

Watching your misery through pen
Bleeding through ink and not in red
The havoc that is taking
I wish I could chase away

Only able to watch the pain
Like a shooting star streaking through rain
My body seeping up the remnants it feels through the stresses

If only I could call your names
If I could just ease the darkness that quakes
And whisper sweet nothings in its face...
If only you knew that the breaks in the lines were my heart beats
To encourage you to keep breathing

With every dagger that strikes
So too does my love burn bright
This hidden desire to be a weapon
To help you defend and remember

But here I watch on and pray
Keeping these secret hopes locked away
And suppress the cries to strip that which keeps you majestic...

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Beavis's picture

Vivid!!!

Love the emotion and imagery! "Like a shooting star streaking through rain" really struck me! Nice write ;-)

SSmoothie's picture

Wonderful! I love it! Hugss

Wonderful! I love it! Hugss


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

Astral_Tides's picture

Oh man I love the places this

Oh man I love the places this travels. Connecting so naturally to such meanings.
Feeling pains and woes of others and in turn wishing those planes to know better views.
I often battle misery when it rears its melting presence too.

"If only you knew that the breaks in the lines were my heart beats
To encourage you to keep breathing" - Amazing line!!

Been enjoying your recent writings a great deal, thank you for painting in public once again : )


"The stars awaken a certain reverence, because though always present, they are inaccessible; but all natural objects make a kindred impression, when the mind is open to their influence." R.W.E.

 


 

soulstonic's picture

Thank you :D I always enjoy

Thank you :D I always enjoy reading your comments. And yes, so often I read people's works on here, including yours, and I wish I could just wipe it away or at least know what to say that may help. But alas, I'm pretty awkward in nature xD and I am not so self righteous to think I could play God.

Thank you! I hope more writes come to me soon. I miss writing :)

Hugs.

~Soul