Above Infatuation

That feeling I get when you're here
It pulsates a rhythm that is constant and clear,
It never strays, waivers, or stops.
This feeling makes me weak of heart!
And though I'm taken by another
Our souls seem to blend beautifully
-Like two colors
To you, who, by timing, is not my lover
But became something much more elevated
If it makes sense, logical or not
My love for you goes beyond-
Any sensation, lust, or adornment
Above the influence of my heart
Just. My. Soul.
Because the heart can be exceedingly wicked
I cannot trust what its opinion might give
For now let's float in innocence
Away from the darkness, away from sin
Away from premonitions of what might give in

Author's Notes/Comments: 

So I don't feel its complete or finished but for now this is what I have. There will be future revising and maybe a continuation. :)

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BlackRainbow0fHope's picture

I love this.. I guess I never

I love this.. I guess I never really looked at the heart, & saw it's wicked tendencies.. this is amazing & worded wonderfully & I want to be able to improve my own writing so I can express my positive feelings towards others as well off. =]

soulstonic's picture

Aww! You make me swoon with

Aww! You make me swoon with those compliments! and my dear, your writing already captures messages of the heart :)

Astral_Tides's picture

I see this plane of yours

I see this plane of yours quite well.
Feels passionate and almost a bit confused as well as contridictive;
as well a meaningful part you caught the right piece in the right light.
This speaks loudly and energetically to me.
Quite lovely!


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SSmoothie's picture

INCREDIBLE WRITE! BRAVO!

INCREDIBLE WRITE! BRAVO! loved this!! Cheers SS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

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soulstonic's picture

Thank you do much!

Thank you do much!