Rape

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I meet you in a broken bar

You lay your pity on me

Lets go outside

Lets take a ride



I lay you on the cotton dress

And scent you with sweet sweat

Lets break the ice now

Let feed our emotions



Im inside you now

Your sweat smell is intense

Lets go harder baby

Lets go better baby



I feel your claws in my skin

The blood hits the sweat

Lets push harder now

Lets go faster



And finally the ecstacy hits

Your screams hit my skin

It's totally better now

It's so better now



And I've destroyed you now

You lay helpless and broken

Shall we go again

...Like you have a choice

Author's Notes/Comments: 

...really, what can I say about this.

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my_thoughts's picture

YIPES! This poem was pretty good. At first I thought that it was consentual but that last sentence at the end really got me!

skylark913's picture

quite interesting side to write from. kudos, not many people have the guts to write from the rapists view point. it's a powerful poem, although, creepy, i must say, but well writtin. the last line makes the poem i think. really sums it up and adds a final cynical twist. keep writing.

someone's picture

what the fucking hell..