Undamper n pamper

He thought he was

Doing this world a service

By blocking her light and

Spinning her round and round


He thought not that his real service

Would have been to spin her right

Revealing her light to them all

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David's picture

Very Nice

I like the meter. I like the feeling of movement. The feeling of being spun about and around. I like the repetition and the front rhyming. 

sootyash's picture

Thank you

Thank you, David. I appreciate the read and comment. Hope we can get the rhyme flowing again soon. :)

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