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Eyes Closed
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Blah Eyes closing to daylight
Darkness falling on sight
I open my eyes once again
To see this world is a fen
The muck and the mire spread
Outwards, leaving behind the dead
To rest in their graves for eternity
Until your shores don't touch my seas.
2-20-03
I love line 8, the last line in the poem...I don't know. Weird...Sometimes an entire poem gets me, sometimes it's just a line.
Good work though..That's obvious! :)