Deny

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You deny your beauty

You deny your talent

You deny your creativity

Everything that is great about you

You deny

A beauty that is

To me, unparalled

Your talent and creativity

That I love to explore

Immerse myself in

And become lost in

You deny

You deny your importance

And almost, your existence

And you deny

Me.



January 19, 2003

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LaRae Lohstroh's picture

that was great....it makes me think of what my ex boyfriend could've said to me...and it hit really close to home...good job

Cliff Siler's picture

A bit difficult to read without punctuation marks. However, I read it 3 times and found it very intriguing. A very in depth piece.

M. Janet Allen's picture

I read your poem "Deny" and really "felt" it. I felt I knew exactly where you were and what you were thinking. I'm glad PostPoems sent it out as a "Daily Random Poem."

Travis Kuntz's picture

Great job! I really like this poem!
Keep writing!

^_^

James Daniel Darr's picture

A intresting peice here and one i can very much relate too
James Darr Author of Poetry's New Leash On Life

Heather Campbell's picture

I love this poem as you can tell its true for alot of people. you've really captured how everyone, in one way or another, feels.