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If you saw me crying

Would you walk over

And comfort me?

If you saw me bleeding

Would you walk over

And help me?

If you saw me dying

Would you walk over

To save me?

If you saw me walking

Would you care

That I even existed?

I thought you would

I thought you might

But then again

I thought wrong

Cuz you don't care

You don't give a damn

And you sure as hell

Don't give a shit

Enough to see me drowning here

As you walk over me

Through a door I could never open.



July 22, 2002

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©22 July 2002 - 9:16am — solpemachaco
27 January 2006 - 4:02pm — Nicole Scalfer (not verified)
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WOW! Great work! Again, very heartfelt, and understated!

19 November 2002 - 12:20am — hhickson
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Ain't love grand. It gives us so much inspiration.

HK

22 July 2002 - 9:36am — Courtney Roy (not verified)
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hmmm. . . a very depessing poem. yet, in answer to those questions would be "yes". but of course i don't know you all that well. its a good poem, u always can do better than me! hehehe Keep writing!