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Someone Else's Eyes
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Blah The sky was blue today
Not green, or red, or orange
But blue
Like the color of your eyes
But not as deep
Or as pure
But just as lonely
As I remember you to be
When I saw you last
Searching for answers
In someone else's eyes.
June 9, 2002
This is an excellent poem. Well woven, it beautifully describes your emotion, as well as hers. My only criticism would be the word just, especially used the first time. Your word choice is very precise and descriptive, but this word draws away from the quality of your verse. Again, an inspiring poem. Thank you.
Greatness. I really liked this