The long walk

The long walk

Is the walk worth the wait ?
fall is coming it's getting cold
Leaves have all fallen
the ground dances around me
as I walk by
Come to a stop .
stuck at the crossroads of trying
Is the sun in the distance a allusion ?
How far does one have to walk alone,
to been seen or heard ?
Does anyone care at the end of this long walk ?
Walk or drop?, I ask myself everyday .
Legs are numb ,
Mind is dead
So thrusty for affection
So hungry for acceptance
I tell myself just ten more feet
just walk a little longer
The fields are getting bare
I see the crosses of the fallen
where they layed down and died
I tell myself "I'll make it"
The paved road has ended
muddy hateful ground I walk now
will I make it ?
Will I fall ?
Who knows ?
Who cares ?

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I care and I'm poking a

I care and I'm poking a pointy stick at your butt! Keep moving! Gorgeous writing I never expect any less! Love your work, all the more special because it comes from a holy place, you.


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

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Thanks :), But I haven't been

Thanks :), But I haven't been able to write Lately with school and work and it upsets me that I can't post stuff :\ My mind is messed up . -.-


“Courage doesn't always roar. Sometimes courage is the quiet voice at the end of the day saying, "I will try again tomorrow.”

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U got amazing talent

I applaud you. Keep posting.


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Thank you=]<3

Thank you=]<3


“Courage doesn't always roar. Sometimes courage is the quiet voice at the end of the day saying, "I will try again tomorrow.”