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Peaches & Cream
Softness of a feather
Gently running down the length of your back
Feel the hands all over
Taken you under
Light headed
In a state of euphoria
Blessed by the sweetest angel
Ride the cloud
Tumble into my arms
Embrace the eroticism of nature
And crumble
Sweet peace
Careless love
Another broken halo
Chatters in the moment
In the stillness
Shatters
Please me
Take my pain
Flow into this heavenly blue
And slide through
In this jumbled mixture
We’ll fly through
And take flight
As we sleep
In the shade
Sinners we may be
But this no one sees
Having reeled in horror at
Having reeled in horror at the first line, I have a feather phobia, and the only thing that ran down my back were tingles of terror lol. However once past that I really enjoyed this very erotic but subtle poem.
the back of my eyes do see what words will not come forth, yet it is a beautiful love story
one love Corey & co
WOW! How beautifully written. So real. Reading gives you the feel of such beauty. Thank you for sharing.
Leah
Well done!! Sensual, sensitive, yet erotic at the same time. This is a place where only two people exist locked together in mind, body & soul.
Thanks to Karyn for alerting me to your work.
Amy Riberdy
Gentle is the night♥
I see a beautiful erotic sensual write that took my breath away.. Softly planting the most beautiful pictures in my mind as I read this...
WOW, So breath taking...
Peace and Love..
Judy
You are one of the better male writers of sensual/erotic poetry and I've read plenty. Hats off to you.
this is a new favorite of mine, it's erotic and passionate, absolutely beautiful
I see two things: 1) the beauty of the structure of this poem and the way in which the words are deployed; and 2) a somewhat subtle, yet equally noxious, implication toward the lifestyle called BDSM.
Starward
Yeah, you make it sound like only you and the other person know about the Sin...cool.
Johannah
I like what I see, Steve, I really do. This is a very nicely painted picture. It's usually women who write the good sexy poetry. but this here is tops. Five stars for Steve.
Hey, This is very good. Very alluring and seducting. I enjoyed. Good Job!! Danielle Passionetepoet