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Love Bites
Love bites for one reseaon only
IT SUCKS
Lots of people don't understand it
I know I don't
IT SUCKS
I don't think I"ll ever understand it
Maybe I'll never have too
IT SUCKS
Love bites for one reseaon only
IT SUCKS
Lots of people don't understand it
I know I don't
IT SUCKS
I don't think I"ll ever understand it
Maybe I'll never have too
IT SUCKS
Hey Kelsey,
DOn't worry, you will find someone. I promise and he will be just as crazy as you. At least we hope he will be as crazy. I love you and you will always be my best friend and Me you and kelly will always be the 3 musketeers.
I know this poem was supposed to be sad and depressing, but honestly, I found it a little funny! :)
It is a great poem. Love may not bite or suck all the time but it can and you can be hurt. Anyone that has been in love with someone without the feeling being mutual knows what I mean.
Dont take notice of these critiques - Sure, love doesent suck but it may have done for you when you wrote this piece. Poetry is for expressing the feelings you feel at any given time. I have read a number of your pieces and you are a great read - so to speak. Keep it up.
DJ
it is the worste text of yours have been read. love is not a bites and sucks, love is a noble feeling and a great value leads to marriage and to build a new life and a new world.
with best wishes
Young girl u r mistakin when u find a tru love it will nvr go away n u will kno it is meant 2 b love doesnt bite suck or w/ u may say