~What to do~

What to do

I don't know

What to do

Help understand

What to do

I'm all smothered

What to do

I just not sure

What to do

I'll ask for help on

What to do

I guess thats

What I'll do

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What should I do?

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Emi's picture

I read them all they were great you are really good at this. Write more and take care LOVE YA!!!

ranger's picture

i felt the setitaion and confusion in your text,a real cry form a young soul,i see that the answer is to walk in GOD's straight path, with best wishes
muslim ranger

Ryan's picture

I really liked the poem. It made great use of repitition to emphasize and catch attention. I could really feel the emotion of the poem. Loved it!