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Colder Still

My heart grows ever colder

No love portrayed within

And when I said I loved you

I didn't think it sin



With you I am nothing

Lost away in years

And as I sit and wonder

My eyes fill up with tears



You know that you complete me

You are the wholesome package fair

My fingers tense to wishful

To run them through your hair



Am I without life inside

Did you take away it all?

Were you the one that crushed me?

Did you love compact my fall?



I know it doesn't mean that much

But I write this poem true

That as I sit and wonder

I know that I love you


Author's Notes/Comments: 

We all are sinful og making other do something threy do not wish to do. And sometimes that includes making them love you.

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last updated 12 October 2010 - 3:45am
©24 December 2003 - 2:10pm — smartalec
10 August 2006 - 7:47pm — No One's Baby Girl (not verified)
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oh my gosh!!! I love this poem, but who is it about???? OMG!!!! It's wonderful so heartfelt, so full of emotion... WOW!!!

I love you Robert!!!

*Sarah*