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Broken Save me from the dark
The dark that's caving in..
Save me from this world
The world that was once true..
Save me from the nothing
The nothing that I can't see..
Save me from the undone
That I'm bond to do..
And just save me
Save me from myself
The me you can see...
i really like this one it reminds me of something i would right i love it =]
:)I loved this
"the undone that I am bound to do" was such a good line! It was prolific! (thats one of my fav words lol) you really have talent! I hope you keep writing!
the only thing that through me off was the last line, it sounds odd saying "the me no one see" I think it might flow better if you added can see
much love
ash
Much Love
Ashley