The Norm After the Storm

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March 2013

Wish you had courage to stop me from

turning into the monster that i've become,

all the times i felt like nothing,

would be replaced by moments feeling like something,

 

they always have everything and i have zilch,

it's like they're all neat freaks that see me as filth,

well i made the bed i sleep in, no regrets,

i know who i am so the rest of the world won't forget,

 

my words will be here long after i've expired,

like a batting average lasts long after the player retired,

well you are that average, and i've lost my form,

sinking in the quicksand everyone calls the norm,

 

same routine and i keep fighting to leave it,

just like she quickly left me, still can't believe it,

wish you had the courage to change my past present

and future instead of soaring back into heaven.

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iwonderwho's picture

i like this poem

No, resist, come back. You're better than the norm. you know who you are, where as the norm isjust one big monotonous blob. 

Silver__lining's picture

the norm is unhealthy, even

the norm is unhealthy, even if its needed for a short amount of time to fall back into the groove of things

for the record, this is one of my favorite poems ive ever written, all true and nonstop scratching of my pen against paper. exhilarating!

thanks for the read and comment :)

 


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iwonderwho's picture

you're welcome! :) and when

you're welcome! :)

and when you get out of the norm, after it's sucked you in for a bit, you're always on the edge of the norm pit for a while, in danger of falling in. so it takes a strong person to make their way out of the norm. 

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the pit we fall in is only as

the pit we fall in is only as deep as we allow it


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iwonderwho's picture

hmmm...wise words. never

hmmm...wise words. never thought about that. but what about the other people that are dragging you deeper into it, or forcing you down into it? 

Silver__lining's picture

only by using the brutal and

only by using the brutal and unrelenting honesty. sucks for the person but they will secretly be thankful for it

i know from experience, i have unfortunately pulled people into my pit and ruined my image to them


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iwonderwho's picture

ohkay, so be completely

ohkay, so be completely honest? well, i'm definitely not good at that.....but if it works out in the end. i guess i can try. 

so what i'm getting from this is that i shouldn't try to pull people into my pit. but my pit is different from the norm pit. so i'm all alone in my pit

Silver__lining's picture

dont worry about pulling

dont worry about pulling people into your pit. someone can love you and want to be anywhere with you, even if it means at the bottom of your pit.

i wouldn't really take my advice though, kind of the wrong person to ask


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