Just Left Me Under The Stars

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August 2012

Can only hold my own weight, about 160,

danks my aroma like you just unzipped me,

late night parties, i got the goods with me,

you can call me Jack but there ain't no Lost in me,

 

out in New Orleans feeling drunk and breezy,

over to Cali where my accent makes it easy,

to provoke a girl to text me "come see me",

just like your morning meal, i am over easy,

 

a night sober, surely it has been awhile,

i'm staying drunk like sober was out of style,

inhaling a type of smoke, hoping for a tumor?

so to girls out in Cali me being dead is not a rumor,

 

i'll only stop to watch the shooting spree of Cupid,

cause me falling in love surely sounds stupid,

Katrina just left my bed, now my room is roofless,

sleeping underneath the stars, my AC is useless.

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This is really good, I love

This is really good, I love it!!
It really spoke out to me
Made me feel like I was somewhere else
and that's a really cool thing to do!!

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glad i was able to provoke

glad i was able to provoke your imagination to take you somewhere else, where ever that may be :)


can you hear me now?