Lose Myself in Our Cuddle

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February 2012

Another day of privacy my vacancy was sold,
and i know that "acting" depressed was getting old,
maybe someone should have kept quiet like tip toeing,
baby you are the way i should be going,

the type of girl i've been waiting for,
for you i'd probably hold up a store,
want more? already told you it's hard to say no,
the hair, eyes and lips always seem to know,

you should understand how quickly you've grown on me,
quickly made me pooh fiending for some honey,
i can lose myself in our cuddle,
take all my puzzles and throw em in a puddle,

thank you for being there when i can't be alone,
cause tonight is the loneliest night i've ever known,
maybe i can just pop myself to sleep,
so the nagging thoughts won't make a peep.

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js

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SSmoothie's picture

this was great! everything except

pooh fiending for some honey... it just stuck out like a sore bum. ;) cheeks SS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

Silver__lining's picture

id be lying if i said that i

id be lying if i said that i didnt know that one line in this writing was the only weak link... and a piece is only as strong as its weak link. funny that someone else noticed it, maybe later on i can relook at this and fix up that line... Winnie the Pooh fiending for honey....smh


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