cleaning up

looking deep inside of me

rushing this bruised heart be free

all this pain that i've endured

believing i'm already cured

making change cuz we're broke in more ways than one

in exchange we'll both shine in the sun

from having all this love so pure and true

to feeling such despair and loss it's just cruel

til death do us part was the vow

let these hearts find their way somehow

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let me say again and again the same words from the core of my heart the logics expressed in this poem with a good idea.. I went through few of your poems and loved them are good poetess and hope you never stop writing and add more poems.. this poem is good and love it..hope you like my poems too.. and let me know if they also touch your heart.. I am basically a peace wisher poet with 6 books published... I am a peace dreamer, love-based peace promoter... hope you be with me... let me share here one of my own famous say with you... ( a friendly smile is the best weapon of war to fight with..afzal shauq