" SLEEPING LOVE "

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love

How can I begin,
to comprehend,
that your love for me,
has come to an end?
How did I fail,
to loose the trail,
of an everlasting love,
with no chance to prevail?
I feel enormous pain,
and so much strain,
from the torture of,
this love in vain.
My heart is broken,
from all word's spoken,
through a love so lost,
that'll never again be awoken.

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Where did I go wrong? He was here yesterday and gone the next? The Love That I Lost!

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Ramiro Tomلs-Ventura's picture

What is love? Is it something that ends or is it something that you give up on? Certainly, love is a Mystery that which no human being can know about it completely, but at least everyone knows something about it.
Love is a unique Mystery, that transcends and the moment anyone says "Love" that becomes just a word, but never grasp the essence of Love in a deep dimention, neither people have a clear concept of Love.
Nacy Langley, addresses two questions at the beginning of her peom which she called "Love". Those questions show the fact that the author has "lost" a love that either she had or she never had. The other half of the peom, is again about her experience of pain, due to the "love" she lost. This tells that every human being is bulnerable, and fragile to situations like loving someone who never shows you love back in a deep level.
People love the wrong person and then they get hurt at the end; life is a risk and loving someone, you are risking everything. People take chances, but at times they end up "loosing" and that is to say "I risked everything, and I lost."
These questions are for the author: What is your concept and understanding of love? If people "fall in love" can they "fall out of love?" What type of love are you talking about in your poem? Is it an Aesthetic Love, love of utility, or authentic love? By authentic love I mean that love for spouses, where there cannot be error.

dragonzite's picture

my heart goes out to you, but please remember. Love like its never going to hurt.

Zabrina Dacres's picture

Very nice poem!!! I enjoyed it.