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Velvet Rose
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I lost my everything
I lost my word
Several things I forgot
At the cost of my world.
I cherished a sweet dream
That became fade-
No one is responsible
It was my fate.
My memories left me
Long years ago,
Though still a long way
Yet I have to go.
I alone walk on the path
With all my pains,
Moving around my entity,
By my own veins!
My fingers become stiff
I fail to write-
The sun yet shines,
Without giving the light!
Save me, rescue me-
From where I am.
Let me write a poem,
Oh! I can’t damn!
Did I forget all?
Hidden inside me?
I can’t bear anymore.
Please set me free.
Two drops of tears
Dripped on my prose-
Fall down on the ground
My sweet velvet rose.
Amazing title.
By the second verse I had a tear run down my cheek.
Fantastic poem. Deffinatly one of my favourtites
wow wow wow well ur amazing and i am complimented that u like mine.....keep it up. can u do me a favor and help me with my titles cause i just made up some cause i dont usually title my poems
I loved the title, which is what drew me to read the poem. Sad but beautiful.
this is good. I especially like the first and third verse.