NO FAREWELL

ITS HARD TO SAY GOODBYE

SO I WILL SEE YOU IN THE FUTURE

YOU DON'T HAVE TO CRY

BEFORE I GO TAKE A PICTURE

I'M STILL IN YOUR HEART

EVEN THOUGH ITS HARD TO BE APART

IT WOULDN'T BE RIGHT IF I SAID FAREWELL

WITH MUCH ON MY MIND

ONE DAY I SHALL PREVAIL

THEN I SHALL I SEE AND NOT BE BLIND

I SHALL NOT SAY FAREWELL FOR IF I RETURN

KEEP FAITH AND BELIEVE IN ME

FOR I WONT BE GONE LONG

JUST THINK OF BIRDS FLYING ACROSS THE SEA

TRYING TO MAKE THEIR WAY HOME

JUST LIKE TREES LOSE THEY LEAVES

ITS TEMPORARY I WILL BE BACK

I'M TRYING TO SAY ALTHOUGH I'M GONE

IN YOUR MEMORIES I NEVER LEFT

SO I CAN'T SAY FAREWELL BECAUSE I WOULD BE LYING

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WRITTEN 01/21/09

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SSmoothie's picture

It's a typical poem on an un

It's a typical poem on an un original theme but I loved the 'you' in this. Your personal voice is quite charming. You have a nice way with words although quite safe iMagine how awsome you will be when you start to take risks, thinking of unusual metaphors to explain the likeness of what you feel, I have read your other poems and haven't been disappointed yet, although somewhat a little unsatisfied, can't wait to see what you do next keep writing your journey is beautiful.


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

msjwh's picture

YOU are good!

Don't listen to Sanctus!
You are a poetic genius!
Please continue to write.

sanctus's picture

This is awful. Not at all

This is awful. Not at all trying to be rude, but I'd find a new hobby if I were you. Writing poetry is clearly not "your thing".

poetrylover's picture

IS WRITING YOUR THING? IF YOU

IS WRITING YOUR THING? IF YOU THINK IT  IS STOP BEING SO MEAN TO OTHER PEOPLE.


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