CINQUAIN-One Carefree Day



the sky opened

we ran to seek shelter

from the brewing storm. Drenched, we were


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Netta Jack's picture

I see you are a master of cinquain. I have been reading several of your pieces. You have your own style and it shines through perfectly. Thanks for sharing.

serene's picture

Thanks, V! I changed it already. :)


Violet Carolina's picture

not really a critique, but question...should the open be opened since the rest is past tense? had an experience like this one, only not much laughing. it took a bit to realize we weren't in a real "twister" scene. : )