CONTRASTING VISTA



you,

seem to hold

a promise

between

your hands

incandescent, burning

in the irises

of your eyes



whilst



i,

slipped

my hold

upon

the moon

as i,

carry

a sleeping sun

on my forehead.












Author's Notes/Comments: 

A play on words and metaphors to come up with imagery.

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Patricia Jones's picture

Excellent imagery. Well-written and graceful.

Violet Carolina's picture

i'm curious about the sleeping sun on her forhead...anything more you can tell me? if not, that's okay. i really liked it.