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I Love Everything I Hate About You
I hate that your OCD,
But I can deal with it
I hate that you like me,
(because I'm obviously not good enough for you)
But I'll deal with it
I'm not crazy about you drinking,
But its alright
I hate that your so far away,
But I'll be alright
I hate how I can't hear you think,
But I can manage
I hate when you run out of things to say,
But I'll manage
Your parents intimidate me,
But I'll survive
Your ex's infuriate me,
But I will survive
It irks me to know you're smarter,
I'll get over it
I cry when you can't call me,
But I will get over it,
It kills me I can't see you everyday,
But I can hold on
It kills me to only be able to think about you
Your burning touch,
The spark of your kiss,
The chill of your breath,
Everyday;
But I'm still holding on.
All of thesse things that bug me,
That could make or break others,
They don't really take affect.
They actually just add to the fact,
That is so true....
For this to be the only things that bother me,
Just proves,
I love you
its good
But I think the only thing that would help is that, it seems like your writing is more directed towards yourself, like your writing this just to get your feelings out
But rather writing it to EXPRESS your feelings, like the last 4 lines of the first stanza:
The spark of your kiss
The chill of your breath
Everyday;
But I'm still holding on.
---- I really like that park the mostest
Good start though, keep trying pleaseo :]
A mirror is all that is ever wanted from a shadow
alright! will start on that
alright! will start on that tonight! ;)