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Ode to the Essance of Love
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Poems I shouldn't do this anymore
I am just too sore
Dedicated to you forevermore
My heart goes in two pieces tore
You were sent to me
I wanna give you up now
For normality
You watch me take your life away
In aw of my dismay
I can't convince you any other way
To go the fuck away
Go the fucvk away from me
Don't try to ask me how
I've lost all reality
Distance makes the heart grow numb
And you always have this doubt
And you always have this doubt in me
Don't try to buy me flowers
I know they come from the ground
Never put a price on me
I told you never put a price on me
Annoying how you're mocking me
Or I'll realize your eyes are blue
And I'm bad with eye contact, cept with you
You say I'm free
I know you let me go
But remember that I always come back
Because I love you so
This was very well written..and I felt as if I can relate to what you were feeling when you wrote this down..which means that you accomplished writing a good poem.
I looked at your bio before I read your poems and it said that you were from H.B.? Did you mean Honey Brook? Because if you did..I'm from there as well and I agree that it's horrible..
Anyways, keep up the good work doll, you have amazing talent.