Summer Sighs {Nipponnet form}

Seasonal Poetry

midsummer magic
amber hills thirsting for dew
prickly seed thistles 

glimmer through the eaves
filtered sun rays peek through shade
warms napping fern

petrichor fountain 
summer sun glistens in spray 
liquid concerto

countless falling stars
night time light show for lovers
lightning bugs sparking
flirting crescent moon sighing
sultry swirl of midnight breeze

Author's Notes/Comments: 

First time for this Nipponnet form

575 575 575 57577 syllable count

1 theme comprised of 3 haiku  1 tanka 

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Starward's picture

Wow!  Brilliant!  And did you

Wow!  Brilliant!  And did you invent this form?


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Sassylass's picture

Thank you

No this was a crafted together form by a fellow poetess at another site.

I just entered her contest a gave it a

I appreciate your comment very much!

Poetry is passion,imagination & soul mixing together....