Promises

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Love Poems

 

You have my word;

this written word of mine,

Indecipherable syllables,

word forged in fire and rhyme.

 

Take it to savor sweet,

 released from my own lips,

it's all I mean to say

to breathe profound significance.

 

Throughout an entire lifetime

of silent complicity,

my love will forever go on

in tender breaths of felicity.

 

You have my promised word

of this love that will truly last,

don't make a grave mistake

born of a painful past.

 

You have my word;

this written word of mine,

indecipherable syllables,

word forged in fire and rhyme.

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ChryWizard's picture

Well said..

I truly liked this poem...  I read it twice just to make sure It tell the same as the first read. 

This is the first poem of yours I`ve read... (I think) and I`m looking to read more. 

BTW... Thank you for reading mine.  I hope you enjoy mine as much as I`m sure I will enjoy yours!!!

Honestly,  Paul aka: ChryWizard


As the eyes are the windows of our soul,

My poetry is the windows of my heart!!!

Stephen's picture

Intriguing.

Rushing up from somewhere deep within your emotional past.   ---   Stephen

Sassylass's picture

Yes

That's true and very perceptive of you.

Old write :) thanks so much!


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