@ 27.055 MHz: Ad Astra; Foliage, 08 [XLIX]

Callimachus, Rhianus, and Straton of

Sardis---help me.  My SweetLeaf has curled

away from me, on the vine out of my reach.

Were, ever, you Poets, afterthoughts?  Did your

boyfriends profess love?



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patriciajj's picture

An aching, honest and melodic

An aching, honest and melodic cry that cuts deep, rings devastatingly true, but chimes so beautifully. The image of a leaf on a vine out of reach is particularly stirring.

 

You turned deep pain into a work of art. 

 
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Thank you, and I corrected

Thank you, and I corrected the stupid typo in the poem.  And thank you for understanding the poem as you do.


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