@ 27.055 MHz: Ad Astra; Foliage, 05 [XLIX]

Thank you, SweetLeaf:  I realize the pattern---

I was your afterthought, no doubt about it

just as Swedening was my afterthoughtm, too.

Respectful uninstrusivity is still

just "plian old neglect."



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Not being in someone's

Not being in someone's thoughts at all is perhaps less painful than being an afterthought. We've all been there, but that doesn't make it any easier. A very identifiable feeling, precisely and skillfully expressed.

 

Although the pain here is palpable, the expression is essential. This poem was an act of release, of purification: a necessary step on the road to healing. God bless. 

 

 

 

 
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Thank you.  I cannot extend

Thank you.  I cannot extend the series beyond the eighth poem; the wound is still too fresh.


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