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A heart belonging to no one beats itself drunk with adrenaline
Exposed and open in an empty bar
No walls
No barriers
Just it and the world
The vastness of space consuming its soft, moist tissue
A dream lying broken before me
Smudged in the ink of this pen

 

 

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©30 October 2012 - 4:24am — running_with_rabbits
30 October 2012 - 11:24pm — ashes_theartofb...
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I agree.

With Mr. Poofs!

Don't touch a damn thing.
I love this.

Especially:

"The vastness of space consuming its soft, moist tissue"

Ugh! That line..
Awesome. <3

"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo

3 November 2012 - 9:56pm — running_with_rabbits
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:)

:)

Much Love

Ashley

30 October 2012 - 7:17am — mrpoofs
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I like the last lines. They

I like the last lines. They finish up the poem pretty well, I think. And the first line is ballin. Might steal it as a personal motto to keep myself from doing stupid things. Title is hilarious. All in all really good stuff

3 November 2012 - 9:59pm — running_with_rabbits
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:) Thanks

:) Thanks

Much Love

Ashley